Posté le: Jeu 29 Aoû 2013 15:56 Sujet du message: [Terminée] Traduction : Saison 2.
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Bon voilà la saison 2 en anglais !
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J'attends vos remarques avec impatience !
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Few days after the first materialization of Aelita , Jeremy has created a new program : Vehicles For the Lyokowarriors : everyone has it ‘s own , adapted to his personality , that Aelita can borrow occasionally .
In addition , Jeremy has updated his scan witch is finding the towers previousely activated by X.A.N.A. The program , freshly called Superscan detects instantly every tower infected by the virus .This discovery has a lot of results : henceforth Aelita can with her friends on Earth , and return when needed on Lyoko only for deactivating towers without staying in pulsation’s anxiety.
Unfortunately for our heroes , X.A.N.A. had also find how amaze them : a new monster , the tarantulas .It’s a power that is distinctly superior than other common monsters; Bloks , Kankrelats or Krabs. Because one of these can beat the trio of the warriors (cf Episode 27 :New order.)
The quarto of schoolboys is by not much left to be filled by welcoming their friend now almost-human . At hignschool , she is playing the role of Odd’s cousin : Aelita Stones. However, the life as an earthling is not at ease and she has often disturbing visions of a past she never knew (Episode 27 « New order »). These visions often appears near a particular place : The hermitage a deserted house with a secret corridor leading to the factory ; This dilapidated building was owned by an old Kadic’s teacher : Franz Hopper .
In the days that follow, the heroes discovred the fifth Sector, witch they were unaware. This Sector is very necessary for the 4 others : He is acceded by the lyoko-warriors in the Transport Orb, the sector change his appearance non-stop, we find in it an interface where are indicated informations about X.A.N.A. and about monsters witch defends only this sector... It seems like X.A.N.A.’room (Voir rubrique les Lieux).
In addition to this area, a new monster appeared: the Scyphozoa. It seems to be unique and could never be destroyed. The particularity of this monster that has no weapon but can steal Aelita's memory. They still do not know but if the company were to succeed, XANA will escape from the supercomputer.
From the first meeting with the monster, things change radically! While XANA continues to launch many attacks but he will always try to steal Aelita's memory with his new monster. Only positive point, the supercomputer and monsters no longer take the risk of killing the girl with pink hair ... The discovery of Carthage leaves a opportunity for the heroes: to go on the offensive, by visiting the central territory for discoveries about XANA.
A final new but equally important: the teenagers are discovering the famous diary of Franz Hopper, following the trail of a key locker station out of a plush lying behind a poster in a room of the Hermitage (Episode 31 « Monsieur Puck »). It is a set of digital data stored in CDs but encrypted. Jeremy decides to decrypt at half convinced that it could be used in the fight against XANA and especially in finding the antivirus. Thesis confirmed by a XANA’s attack to destroy the diary in the same episode where the heroes acquire it.
And the war continues, more and more violent! The heroes discover a scary thing, they had not considered: XANA gains in power with each return to the past that occurs. The supercomputer obtained still greater powers and becomes able for example to take control of a human being, it is the Xanatification! Fortunately the hero’s war skills increase with experience: they are able to face more monsters at the same time. Jeremiah also increased: it activates towers on his own (Episode 47 "Tip-Top shape ) and employs returns in time just in case of absolute need and spends all his time either decryption or to the antivirus. More it progresses, more the name of Franz Hopper returns ...
On the emotional level, Odd saw relationships as ephemeral as frequent. Jeremie and Aelita are still in love, but do not declare themselves. Aelita, more confident than before, steals a kiss in Jérémie (Episode 43 "XANA’s kiss")!
For Yumi and Ulrich, the relationship becomes more convoluted. In addition to Sissi, a new player enters : William. This young man is in the class of Yumi and carries with it a crazy love can not equal the jealousy it inspires in Ulrich. The young man is beautiful, romantic and very brave little or with a tendency to provocation. The war between the young men said earlier and confirmed in episode 36 "Marabounta." Disaster are increasingly present with provocations, brawls (Episode 39 "A bad Turn"). Although in love each other, Ulrich and Yumi insist not to declare and do not succeed without the intercession of Sissi and William ...
The school year is almost over and the attacks of XANA reach levels of violence without precedent. However, a new ally occur: Franz Hopper! The genius is in fact the creator of Lyoko, probably stuck in his own world, wants to get in touch with the heroes and it is not to the liking of XANA (Episode 50 "Contact"). Hopper steals control of one tower to XANA at the decisive battle of Episode 51 "Revelations". With this help, the great Jérémie manages to decrypt the famous diary that reading is more instructive!
The heroes who still did not know, learn many things about the creation of Lyoko. Hopper has created it to counter a military program and also created XANA ... but it escaped him for an unknown reason. Cornered by mysterious men in black, the scientist decided to emigrate with his daughter on Lyoko, girl turns out to be Aelita!
Again, thanks to the newspaper, Jérémy learns two important things are:
The first is Aelita has not any virus, XANA had actually stolen a fragment of itself: all of his memory which contained his childhood memories. It is kept on Carthage and can be recovered during an expedition. It is from there that came the visions of her past.
The second is why XANA wants Aelita's memory: This memory contains the keys to Lyoko. With, XANA could escape the supercomputer, thus eliminating any risk of being disconnected with it.
The heroes then go in search of the missing fragment of Aelita on Carthage. The expedition proved to be a flop! Warriors are devirtualizated and despite using Hopper, Aelita falls into the tentacles of the Scyphozoa that finally manages to steal his memory. Aelita is left to the state of empty shell, died while in a terrible rumbling, XANA extricates the supercomputer in the form of clouds and thick black smoke (Episode 52 "The Key").
Aelita is saved by Franz Hopper, his father, which brings her to life and the same time as Lyoko by sacrificing. Using all his virtual energy, the fallen scientist renders her missing fragment making her a full-fledged human.
Despite the efforts of heroes, XANA escaped the supercomputer and threatens the world.
Our 5 friends are dismayed but their determination has never been greater! Together, they give the mission to continue fighting XANA .
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Inscrit le: 07 Mar 2013 Messages: 68 Localisation: Etats-Unis
Tadam ! Bon travail, ton anglais est génial. La plupart de tes fautes sont quand tu utilises "he/she/it/his/her". "He" et "she" sont utilisé seulement pour des humains et des animaux, et "it" est utilisé seulement pour des objets. "His" et "her" s'accorde avec le sexe de la personne (par exemple, "his" pour n'importe quel mot qui appartient à un garçon comme Jérémy, où "her" pour n'importe quel mot qui appartient à une fille comme Aélita.)
Jeremy's laptop = his laptop / Aelita's laptop = her laptop
De la même façon, the supercomputer's battery = its battery, par exemple.
J'espère que ça va t'aider pour améliorer ton anglais
reyo_le_choco_guerrier a écrit:
Spoiler
A few days after the first materialization of Aelita, Jeremy has created a new program: Vehicles For the Lyokowarriors : everyone has their own adapted to their own personality and that Aelita can borrow occasionally.
In addition, Jeremy has updated the scanning program, which finds the towers previously activated by X.A.N.A. The program, newly called the Superscan instantly detects every tower infected by the virus. This discovery has a lot of results: from now on, Aelita can stay with her friends on Earth and return when needed to Lyoko only for deactivating towers without staying with concern to monitor the pulsations.
Unfortunately for our heroes, X.A.N.A. also found some ways to surprise them: a new monster, the Tarantulas. Its strength is distinctly superior to the other common monsters: the Bloks, Kankrelats and Krabs. Because just one of these new creatures manages to beat the trio of warriors (cf Episode 27: New Order.)
The quartet of students don't remain satiated for long in welcoming their now almost-human friend. At the school, she is playing the role of Odd’s cousin: Aelita Stones. However, life as an Earthling is not so easy, and she often has disturbing visions of a past she never knew (Episode 27 "New Order"). These visions often appear near a particular place: The Hermitage, a deserted house with a secret corridor leading to the factory. This dilapidated building was once owned by an old Kadic teacher: Franz Hopper.
In the days that follow, the heroes discover the Sector 5, which they were unaware of existing. This Sector is very unlike the 4 others: it is accessed by the Lyoko warriors via the Transporter. The sector changes its appearance constantly. Within the sector is an interface where there is information about X.A.N.A. and monsters which defend only this sector... It seems to be XANA's home. (See the Places section.)
In addition to this area, a new monster appeared: the Scyphozoa. It seems to be unique and could never be destroyed. The defining feature of this monster is that has no weapons, but it can steal Aelita's memory. They are unaware at the time, but if the Scyphozoa were to succeed, XANA would escape from the supercomputer.
After the first meeting with the monster, things change drastically! While XANA still continues to launch many attacks, he always tries to steal Aelita's memory with this new monster. Only positive point, XANA and his monsters no longer take the risk of killing the pink-haired girl... The discovery of Carthage leaves open an opportunity for the heroes: to go on the offensive by visiting the central territory for discoveries about XANA.
A final new but equally important discovery: the teenagers manage to obtain the diary of Franz Hopper, following the trail of a key locker station out of a plush lying behind a poster in a room of the Hermitage (Episode 31 "Mister Puck"). It is a set of digital data stored in CDs but encrypted. Jeremy decides to decrypt them, half convinced that it could be used in the fight against XANA and especially in finding the antivirus. His hypothesis is confirmed by XANA’s attack to destroy the diary in the same episode that the heroes acquire it.
And the war continues, even more violently! The heroes discover a scary thing they had not considered: XANA grows in power with each return to the past that occurs. The supercomputer obtained even greater powers and becomes able, for example, to take control of a human being, it is Xanafication! Fortunately, the heroes' war skills increase with experience: they are able to face more monsters at the same time. Jeremy also makes some progress: he activates towers on his own (Episode 47 "Tip-Top Shape") and only uses returns to the past when there's absolute need and spends all his time either to decrypt Franz Hopper's diary or to work on the antivirus. The more he progresses, the more the name of Franz Hopper returns...
On the emotional level, Odd has relationships as short-lived as frequent. Jeremy and Aelita are still in love, but do not declare themselves as such. Aelita, more confident than before, steals a kiss from Jeremy (Episode 43 "XANA’s Kiss")!
For Yumi and Ulrich, the relationship becomes more convoluted. In addition to Sissi, a new player enters: William. This young man is in the same class as Yumi and has a crazy love for Yumi that cannot equal the jealousy it inspires in Ulrich. The young man is beautiful, romantic and very brave with a tendency towards provocation. The war between the young men is declared early on and confirmed in episode 36 "Marabounta." Troubles become more and more present, with provocations and brawls, and so forth (Episode 39 "A bad Turn"). Although in love with each other, Ulrich and Yumi insist not to declare it and do not make it very far without Sissi and William butting in...
The school year is almost over and XANA's attacks reach levels of violence without precedent. However, a new ally appears: Franz Hopper! The genius is in fact the creator of Lyoko, probably stuck in his own world, and he wants to get in touch with the heroes, which is not to the liking of XANA (Episode 50 "Contact"). Hopper steals control of one of XANA's activated towers at the decisive battle in Episode 51 "Revelations". With this help, the great Jeremy manages to decrypt the diary, which proves to be rather instructive!
The heroes learn many things about the creation of Lyoko. Hopper created it to counter a military program and also created XANA... but it escaped his control for an unknown reason. Cornered by mysterious men in black, the scientist decided to emigrate with his daughter to Lyoko, and this girl turns out to be Aelita!
Again, thanks to the newspaper, Jeremy learns two important things:
The first is Aelita doesn't have any virus, XANA had actually stolen a fragment from her: all of her memories which contained her childhood memories. It is kept on Carthage and can be recovered during an expedition. The visions of her past came from there.
The second is why XANA wants Aelita's memory: This memory contains the keys to Lyoko. With these, XANA could escape the supercomputer, thus eliminating any risk of being shut down with it.
The heroes then go in search of the missing fragment of Aelita's memories on Carthage. The expedition proved to be a failure! The warriors were devirtualizated and despite help from Hopper, Aelita falls into the tentacles of the Scyphozoa that finally manages to steal her memory. Aelita is left to the state of an empty shell, dead, while with a terrible roar, XANA frees himself from the supercomputer in the form of clouds and thick black smoke (Episode 52 "The Key").
Aelita is saved by Franz Hopper, her father, who brings her back to life at the same time as Lyoko by sacrificing himself. Using all his virtual energy, the fallen scientist gives her her missing fragment making her a full-fledged human.
Despite the efforts of our heroes, XANA escaped the supercomputer and threatens the world.
Our 5 friends are dismayed but their determination has never been greater! Together, they task themselves with the mission to continue fighting XANA.
Inscrit le: 10 Avr 2013 Messages: 285 Localisation: Dans la campagne, en train de cueillir des pommes.
Merci beaucouo , tu as vu juste et je fais cette traduction non sseulement pour le site mais aussi mon apprentissage . Je suis d accord avec tout ce que tu as dit SAUF que l' on dit it meme pour les animaux . Mon pere m a souvent encouragé pour la traduction car il veut que je puisse coutamment parler l'anglais ; qui est une merveilleuse langue . _________________
It s'emploie pour les animaux. On peut utiliser She ou He seulement dans le cas d'un animal familier, que l'on connaît bien, je pense que c'est ce que tu voulais dire, Coquilame? _________________
"Prouve-moi que tu avais raison, Jérémie, dans tout le mal que tu as causé."
Oblitération, chapitre 13
Et je remercie quand même un(e) anonyme qui refusait qu'on associe son nom à ce pack
Dernière édition par Ikorih le Sam 31 Aoû 2013 13:04; édité 1 fois
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Ikorih a écrit:
It s'emploie pour les animaux. On peut utiliser She ou He seulement dans le cas d'un animal familier, que l'on connaît bien.
Je confirme ce qu'a dit Ikorih.
Note de Shaka : Et quel est l'utilité que "tu confirmes" ?
Quand tu postes, c'est sensé servir à quelque chose, ne l'oublie pas. Ce post-là ne sert à rien. _________________
Inscrit le: 07 Mar 2013 Messages: 68 Localisation: Etats-Unis
Oui, Ikorih, c'est vrai. Dans le cas d'un animal familier, c'est plus poli à dire "he" ou "she". Si tu sais le sexe d'un animal, c'est jamais incorrect à dire 'he'/'she', sinon tu peux utiliser "it". _________________
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